At first it was a little too repetetive, but it got better. I like how you included little clips from things, and added a reverb to make it sound very deep and kinda creepy. Although it didn't really go anywhere, the song went on the same way for most of the song. It might have helped to add some more instruments and to have more of an obvious build up. But generally I thought it was very good, keep up the good work, you've certainly got talent.